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Probably gonna go back and clean it up (a little). Make the art a little more consistent. That's one of my biggest weaknesses I think, making faces look the same panel to panel. But, I don't think it's too bad up there. I also simplified the dialogue to give it less exposition. There's gonna be plenty of time later to explain what's going on here. Thoughts? 

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51 minutes ago, Donutella said:

Nice work so far! Will it stay all black and white? 

 

Thanks!

 

So, I'm thinking it will. I'm also thinking about putting in little color gimmicks too though. Like each main character will have a color identifier. (One'll have yellow eyes, another green hair etc). But that's still up in the air. Right now I kinda want to do a mix between manga, where it stays BnW, but keep it in the dimensions of a traditional American comic. Kind of mesh them both together. Black and white is alot faster to work with too. 

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